The scene in my commercial where the portrait shots of different types of girls/women appear on different spots in the globe...this is the concept art jpeg of what I picture. The only difference is that I decided not to do the world as the background, but rather, just a plain background with the different pictures appearing one after another. It should look something like this at the end of the scene.
Sunday, April 15, 2012
Concept Art Piece
The scene in my commercial where the portrait shots of different types of girls/women appear on different spots in the globe...this is the concept art jpeg of what I picture. The only difference is that I decided not to do the world as the background, but rather, just a plain background with the different pictures appearing one after another. It should look something like this at the end of the scene.
Monday, April 9, 2012
Story Board (rough draft)
Excuse the messiness, but it's a rough draft! The cleaner and clearer story board with my actual images is coming soon!
Have on screen: the flower vines, the girl with heart logo, my quote from the owner, and some words that the narrator emphasizes appear on screen in a handwritten type of feel.
(Basically, I want to have a) the vines with flower heads in the corners, b) picture, c) the steps to the process on the screen).
Wednesday, April 4, 2012
Build A Bra Commercial Idea (In Progress)
I'm thinking that my commercial will go with various portrait shots of different girls/women around the world (emphasizing diversity), one transitioning into the other. Maybe even have a shot of the world with the different continents being shown and different pictures being placed on different spots on the globe (again, diversity). The voiceover talks about how every girl deserves perfection and comfort that is unique to them and their own body type, and ask the question, "Each of us comes from our own backgrounds, but wouldn't it be nice to create a bra that is exactly what you need?" That's where talking about Build A Bra comes in; using some of the graphics I drew that are in my brochure and using my logo, etc. The voice over would quickly, but efficiently say the 4 steps in the creation process, and what our mission is.
I want it to be a 30 second commercial showing the diversity in women's body sizes/types and telling that they can come to one place to get exactly what they need. As far as the technical aspects of it for the animating, that will come as I go along.
I want it to be a 30 second commercial showing the diversity in women's body sizes/types and telling that they can come to one place to get exactly what they need. As far as the technical aspects of it for the animating, that will come as I go along.
5 Commercial Critiques
"Ew. Seriously? So gross."-Geico Commercial
What is the visual style of the film (animated, live action,
stop motion)?
Live action.
What is the tone (happy, sad, scary, funny)?
Funny.
What is the product they're selling?
Saving money through Geico.
Who is their Target Audience?
Adults—35 and up.
What is the 'problem' that the product is solving?
You don’t have to go to such ridiculous lengths to save money; just
call Geico.
How does the commercial talk about these problems?
The commercial shows a man who thought he could save money on weight
loss programs by “hiring the popular girls from the local middle school” to
follow him around. They said, “Ew. Seriously? So gross,” to every fattening
thing he touches. Eventually, he’s trying to sneak meals and is frustrated. At
the end of the commercial it says on screen, “There’s an easier way to
save…Geico, 15 minutes could save you 15% or more.”
Is there a Narrator? If so, is the narrator a voice over (off
screen) or a character on screen?
The narrator is off screen and says the Geico tagline at the end of
the commercial with Geico’s logo in the center of the screen.
Do you feel that the commercial is successful? Why?
Yes; it carries the point across simply and humorously.
"Old Spice-Swan Dive" Commercial
What is the visual style of the film (animated, live action,
stop motion)?
Live action and animation.
What is the tone (happy, sad, scary, funny)?
Funny.
What is the product they're selling?
Old Spice Body Wash.
Who is their Target Audience?
Men.
What is the 'problem' that the product is solving?
That men can smell like the man advertising Old Spice (real name:
Isaiah Mustafa).
How does the commercial talk about these problems?
It advertises that if a lady’s man can smell like an ‘Old Spice man’
then he will do/be everything she’s ever wanted him to do/be. It portrays that
if he doesn’t use Old Spice then he really isn’t fully the man a lady wants.
Is there a Narrator? If so, is the narrator a voice over (off
screen) or a character on screen?
On screen narrator; the man speaking throughout the commercial is
the only one who talks.
Do you feel that the commercial is successful? Why?
I feel that it comically portrays that Old Spice is what a man needs
to be fully a man—which is the goal of the advertisement, so yes, I would say
it’s successful.
What is the visual style of the film (animated, live action,
stop motion)?
Live action.
What is the tone (happy, sad, scary, funny)?
Serious, sad.
What is the product they're selling?
It’s a campaign to stop the drug addiction of meth; “Meth-Not Even
Once” is the name of the campaign.
Who is their Target Audience?
Meth users, which are most likely teens to young adults.
What is the 'problem' that the product is solving?
It portrays what happens (or can eventually happen) from the use of
meth.
How does the commercial talk about these problems?
The commercial shows a group of friends in a car, one being a girl
who is passed out from meth overdose, pull into a hospital parking lot and lets
her out of the car on the ground and drive away. A nurse runs from the inside
and comes to the girl’s side and yells for assistance. The narrator is a girl’s
voice off screen (being the voice of the girl who has overdosed) saying that
her friends are always there for her, they do everything together and she knows
that no matter what happens, they look out for her (starts speaking 15 seconds
into the commercial [30 second commercial]). The point of the irony is to show
that when something goes wrong with your drug use, your friends most likely
will not be there for their own reasons and in most cases, neither will a
nurse. It effectively shows that you’re on your own when something goes wrong.
Is there a Narrator? If so, is the narrator a voice over (off
screen) or a character on screen?
Yes, the voice is off screen but is supposed to be the voice of one
of the girls in the commercial who doesn’t speak.
Do you feel that the commercial is successful? Why?
I do feel the commercial successfully portrays the seriousness of
drug use, specifically meth. Being abandoned by your friends is only one aspect
of it, and the commercial portrays the reality of it and also portrays the
naïve mindset there is in thinking that your friends will be there for you at
your worst hour, but then again, if they were your friends, they wouldn’t be
doing meth with you.
"Weight Watchers-I Can" Commercial
What is the visual style of the film (animated, live action,
stop motion)?
Live action.
What is the tone (happy, sad, scary, funny)?
Inspirational, happy.
What is the product they're selling?
Persuading you to join their weight loss program (Weight Watchers).
Who is their Target Audience?
Adults (mostly) who are overweight and wanting to lose weight and
get healthy.
What is the 'problem' that the product is solving?
Through weight watchers, you lose the weight you need and it teaches
you how to change your eating habits so you can treat yourself better by eating
right and getting active, a lifelong decision.
How does the commercial talk about these problems?
It uses a celebrity that uses the program, Jennifer Hudson, to say
that before weight watchers, she felt like she couldn’t do anything right with
her body, but when she joined Weight Watchers, the program was realistic and
changed her mindset towards the body and eating—she went from thinking she
couldn’t do anything to knowing she could do anything. She says that if you
think you can’t, believe you can and let Weight Watchers help get you there.
Is there a Narrator? If so, is the narrator a voice over (off
screen) or a character on screen?
The voice on screen is Jennifer Hudson, but at the end of the
commercial, there is a voiceover of “Join by September 25th, and
you’ll get a whole month free” by a lady narrator.
Do you feel that the commercial is successful? Why?
I do feel the commercial is successful. There is a successful, well
known and inspirational celebrity who uses this program and is proof that the
program works. She’s realistic in the commercial saying how she didn’t believe in
herself and then explains that it’s because of Weight Watchers’ effective
program that helped her to have that confidence again to know she could do it!
Experience the cruise vacation of a lifetime with Princess Cruises Commercial
What is the visual style of the film (animated, live action,
stop motion)?
Live action and animation.
What is the tone (happy, sad, scary, funny)?
Happy, peaceful.
What is the product they're selling?
Trip on Princess Cruises.
Who is their Target Audience?
Adults, those looking to “experience a vacation of a lifetime.”
What is the 'problem' that the product is solving?
When trying to figure out the perfect vacation for you and your
family, Princess Cruises will give you that experience.
How does the commercial talk about these problems?
It visually displays the various things to do on board and the
different places it stops to along the way—making anyone drool over this sweet
package and want to book their ticket right away. It displays having a vacation
on Princess Cruises as a dream come true because you can “escape completely.”
Is there a Narrator? If so, is the narrator a voice over (off
screen) or a character on screen?
There are some staff members of Princess Cruises that say “Welcome,”
towards the end of the commercial and then a voice over off screen giving quick
information about Princess Cruises.
Do you feel that the commercial is successful? Why?
These types of commercials just need to display what is possible
when going on a cruise, or at least try to capture that in a nutshell and make
it look as appealing as possible and make the audience want to go and book
their ticket right away—which this commercial did do very well. Through the
attractive ways they showed the possibilities on Princess Cruises and what
could be possible for you if you were to experience a vacation with them, I believe
they were successful in selling their offer to the audience.
Monday, April 2, 2012
Final Business Card
The process of my final business card was thickening my stroke so that my logo and flower vines could show up better and making sure that the edges weren't too close and didn't get cut off at all in any of my test prints. Other than that, I had to pick where to place my various graphics without making it look crowded. I figured it out and i'm happy with the way this turned out.
Final Brochure
My process with this brochure was actually just a matter of pasting my images in the right spots and creating the story behind my store. The most frustrating part to me was getting everything to fit on the page without getting anything cut off. I had to do multiple test prints to make sure that each corner of the page wasn't cut off, but to my unfortunate surprise, I didn't realize that some of my text had gotten cut off on the page "The Process"; it was displayed behind the photo of the bra, and I didn't realize that until after I came from the print shop. BLAH! But, it's okay. I worked very hard on it and I like the end product:)
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